My guy just said me No…
No, you can’t talk to another guy,
No, you can’t WhatsApp always,
No, you can’t chit-chat on FB,
No, you can’t look sexy without me,
No, you can’t go out alone,
No, you just can’t be on your own.
Tell a guy, I am a girl who’s not under his dominion.
It’s pure Fiction. Please don’t take it otherwise.
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It depends on how much you want to protect a relationship. In marriage, it definitely is a bunch of ‘NOs.” The husband and wife must be more important to each other than to anything else, potentially, that could make them no longer. “Mr. and Mrs.”
It has to be “us” always in a relationship.
Very true. Thanks for sharing.
ahahahaha the dance of souls together. is it a mismatch fraying or interwoven, knotted forever? all at once two desire clash, in a dance to joy’s ends. someone must bend or there’s but broken to defend. I know one likes hot mr actor sexy prize. what have i lost but raw desire seen in her eyes? I wish to know i matter as first above all, yet without some trust what have i given to earn such all? it’s only a dance of give and take -some say it’s the magic of the lives together we make. at first its a dream then somefrightful mare, what is it but an enlightened meaning more how ideals were sacrificed to always remain right there? it’s a gift our time spent a shared delight together building seperate lives spent.
I like the possessive man, if he is not dominating, of course
Haha, that will be cool but to some limit only… 😉
Just a word to express the soul’s sensitivity. Great wherever you look.
Well done!
<3
Ciao from Italy!
Vicky
☺ Ty Vicky
It’s 2016, not 1242. And that %$# still survives…
Oh so true!
Glad you agreed
Hello.. misstalkaholic..
SMiLes.. Love
never
owns
Love Frees..
Truly Strong Women
and Men never own each
other and the best Gift they Give
is to allow each otHeR’s WiNgs to GroW Stronger..
never
weaker.. now..
This owning thing
comes from Patriarchy..
iN StoRinG gRain from the Field..
Yes.. Starting about the beginning
of Agriculture.. 10 to 12 thousand
years ago.. a trip away from a forAge
of liFe togetHeR wHere the Child is the
prize of the Village
and Love
is the
common
purpose in give and
share and never owning..
wHeRe Greed and Jealousy
and aggression and violence and
sure what leads to the potential for World
War III lives now.. replaCinG relativELy smAll villAges for a forAge
of liFe toGeTheR wHeRe all iS oNe as Nature and God
Can And WiLL Be
found in
everyplace
and everything
And beyond material reductionism
that is the same as owning each otHeR
as objects over free.. as we become the tools
we make and we make each otheR a tool instead of Free..
IT’s true my friEnd.. sAdly..
the words you bRing HeAR
are not uncommon aT all.. iN
fAcT they are basically
common cultural
and religious
precepts
in act
of
effect
sTiLL now
for about
half or more of
the population that exists..
even when the laws of both
religion and culture do not demand
it at the price of legal punishment.. ranging
from
death in law
at extreme to
abuse at home
wHeRe Laws of Culture And
Religion do not do the same..
P e o p l e who walk in liGht..
True Humanists understand
this is DArK.. And most
any owner who becoMes
the tools and makes otHeRS
tools are slave owners.. noW2..
And yes.. Slave too.. Love conquers
aLL NoW when Love as Win togeTheR..
Most Any thing else NoW sTiLL is slave owner
And slave with ownership papers of/as priSon Tools2.:)
Tell Mr. No he has to GO
Yup, let every girl read this.
nice poem
Ty
welcome
When he says he can’t be sexy without her it could be an unintended compliment. Perhaps he finds himself unable to feel sexy when he is alone. I’m glad it’s not a real life story for the author. Sad to say too many people are in relationships where their partner controls their every move fearing the consequences of permitting them independent thought. Counselling or prayer may prove a solution quickly followed by fleeing to a place of safety if necessary. There’s a difference between having input in your partners life and treating them like your pawn or puppet. Sandwiching harsh words with sweet sauce helps to soften the blow. Use only when needed for prolonging and preserving a relationship. The best lovers serve others needs more commonly than their own
I wish every guy would get to read this.. Thank you for your meaningful words and for your concern my friend.
thanks for your sweet as sugar response. I praise the Lord that you got out of that nasty relationship that was causing you so much grief. many women do not have the same bravery as you. may your voice give them the strength within and find the courage they need to break free from their chains as you have. now you breathe relieved , in freedom <3
Sad to say there are guys like that.
Yea unfortunately
A girl too has her on will! 🙂
Yes and we all need reminders for that.
This good case of Emphatic No .very well told poem/
regards
brijkaul brijkauldiary.com
Thank you.
I’m so glad you said at the end that it was fiction! I was getting worried about you.
Haha I knew it… Thank you for your concern.
Agreed. This meets the definition of abuse. #2017
Somewhat yes…
Wow… Deep read. Thank you for that… Many of us need this reminder…
Glad you agreed with me..
A good lesson in respecting women……they are not property, they are human beings and very strong ones at that!!!! Thanks for sharing, Falak!!!!!
Thank you for sharing such powerful words here..
You are very welcome as always!!!! Love your posts!!!! =)